Get Submission Ready.
Pitch Package
Ready to pitch your book to agents? Then this package is for you! Have confidence in your pitch and delivery to agents by investing in doing a comprehensive edit of all your pitch materials.
Query letter review (2 rounds of revision)
Synopsis review (2 rounds of revision)
First 10 pages “deep edit”
SUBMISSION PACKAGE EDITING
Even if you're not ready for a full manuscript edit, your submission package deserves the same level of care and precision. Why? Because agents and editors make decisions fast—often within the first ten pages. As a former literary agent, I can tell you: Agents don’t have time to “wait until it gets good”—your sample is your first impression. My goal is to help you make it unforgettable.
You’ll submit your query letter, short synopsis, and the opening 10 or 25 pages of your novel. I’ll read and comment on your work from an agent’s and editor’s perspective, addressing:
The strength of your story opening and “promise of the novel”
Scene structure, pacing, and character development
Voice, tone, and dialogue
Prose-level refinements through line editing and margin notes
Overall readiness for submission and next-step guidance
All feedback is delivered in written notes directly on your pages, along with a detailed editorial letter summarizing my insights and recommendations.
💼 Service Tiers
Tier 1: Core Package — $450
Query letter, synopsis, and up to 10 pages of your manuscript
In-line comments + editorial letter with developmental and line feedback
Tier 2: Expanded Package — $725
Query letter, synopsis, and up to 25 pages of your manuscript
Comprehensive line and developmental edit with an editorial letter
Tier 3: Premium Coaching Package — $950
Query letter, synopsis, and up to 25 pages
Full edit and editorial letter plus a 30-minute private coaching call to discuss feedback, strategy, and next steps
With this edit, you’ll not only understand what’s working and what’s holding you back—you’ll gain a clear, insider-informed roadmap to make your submission shine.